Kia ora Shakeal my name is Tia from Kawakawa primary school room 3. I like that you said you had fun with all your friends. One thing that you could work on is put more detail in your writing. Where did you go and why did you go there?
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Kia ora Shakeal my name is Tia from Kawakawa primary school room 3. I like that you said you had fun with all your friends. One thing that you could work on is put more detail in your writing. Where did you go and why did you go there?
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